ugh I hate waxing about eyes, whether it's being able to see the precise exact shade changing to some other precise exact shade or how you can see how haunted and wise and whatever they are THEY'RE FUCKING EYES OK
"letting his fingers travel slowly along her jaw and brush against her lips, all the way around and back"
NO NO NO
Also heroes who are important/good/powerful just because of things they were born with and/or automatically have are boring to me. Not that this can't be done well like Buffy the Vampire Slayer or the X-Men, but many writers rely too much on what powers a person is simply GIVEN versus what they do with them, let alone ever, god forbid, earning them instead.
Also it is ever explained how she just...showed up in Hell? Presumably she used that power she has of sort of teleporting, iirc, but like...they don't know that, do they?
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Date: 2015-09-16 02:57 pm (UTC)"letting his fingers travel slowly along her jaw and brush against her lips, all the way around and back"
NO NO NO
Also heroes who are important/good/powerful just because of things they were born with and/or automatically have are boring to me. Not that this can't be done well like Buffy the Vampire Slayer or the X-Men, but many writers rely too much on what powers a person is simply GIVEN versus what they do with them, let alone ever, god forbid, earning them instead.
Also it is ever explained how she just...showed up in Hell? Presumably she used that power she has of sort of teleporting, iirc, but like...they don't know that, do they?
- RF, a-sporking-rat